[WIP] The Man Machine [CANCELLED]

[Kman]

The second one looks nice, but to be honest the first and third are just kinda "meh". They're not necessarily bad, it's just they're nothing that's really too new or exciting. My main problem with it is the lighting, from what I can see you're relying on the light given off by the light entities to light your rooms alone (I'm just basing that off the screenshots you posted), which is a mistake I see a looooooot of mappers make. You should be using pointlights to fade in and fade out light and to highlight certain points in the map, I would go as far to say that you shouldn't be placing a light entity of any sort without having a pointlight or spotlight to accompanying it. If you need more help with that sort of stuff, I'd recommend just going into the maps from Amnesia and looking at how they used pointlights and spotlights.