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Work in progress My First Custom Story DEMO!
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RE: My First Custom Story DEMO!

(10-14-2012, 05:22 PM)Solipsist Wrote: If that was the first level of the campaign, it is pretty bad for the reasons Martinnord noted; but I'll add a few;
•The campaign's description boils down to : "Is the shadow still after him?" And the campaign starts with bangs and drums as a full-blown shadow chasing scene...So the question to that answer lived less than the question "Why is the game called Amnesia". Regardless of the contents of the description, a chasing scene on the start indeed is out of place. It's not scary and it can only be used in this genre (imo) as a plot device. But what were you building exactly with that premise?
•Starting the game with slow-motion...Not a good at all |: I found it rather irritating.
•Even though the scenery was quite appealing, I found the castle's wall not to be aesthetic enough; and the wall was quite surreal in its design (hollowed bevel).

Regardless, for a first go you done pretty well. Kudos for you.

Thanks for the feedback! What would you do to make this better and why? And sorry, but I didn't understand your argument about the castle. Can you be more specific?

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10-14-2012, 06:04 PM
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My First Custom Story DEMO! - by 4WalledKid - 10-13-2012, 06:28 AM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by WALP - 10-13-2012, 04:26 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by 4WalledKid - 10-13-2012, 06:16 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by Solipsist - 10-14-2012, 05:22 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by 4WalledKid - 10-14-2012, 06:04 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by Solipsist - 10-15-2012, 09:42 AM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by 4WalledKid - 10-15-2012, 12:46 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by The chaser - 10-15-2012, 01:09 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by WALP - 10-15-2012, 05:01 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by Solipsist - 10-16-2012, 09:33 AM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by 4WalledKid - 10-16-2012, 11:50 AM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by 4WalledKid - 10-16-2012, 03:14 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by The chaser - 10-16-2012, 03:31 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by 4WalledKid - 10-16-2012, 03:50 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by The chaser - 10-16-2012, 03:54 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by 4WalledKid - 10-16-2012, 11:41 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by Solipsist - 10-16-2012, 10:00 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by 4WalledKid - 10-28-2012, 09:06 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by The chaser - 10-28-2012, 09:19 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by 4WalledKid - 10-28-2012, 10:23 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by Solipsist - 10-31-2012, 02:33 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by 4WalledKid - 10-31-2012, 08:30 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by Solipsist - 10-31-2012, 08:44 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by 4WalledKid - 10-31-2012, 09:14 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by The chaser - 10-31-2012, 09:39 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by 4WalledKid - 10-31-2012, 10:15 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by The chaser - 10-31-2012, 10:21 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by 4WalledKid - 10-31-2012, 10:25 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by The chaser - 10-31-2012, 10:37 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by 4WalledKid - 10-31-2012, 10:42 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by Akos115 - 10-31-2012, 10:28 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by 4WalledKid - 10-31-2012, 10:36 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by Statyk - 10-31-2012, 10:40 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by 4WalledKid - 10-31-2012, 10:44 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by Statyk - 10-31-2012, 10:44 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by Alex Ros - 11-01-2012, 12:29 AM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by The chaser - 11-01-2012, 12:49 AM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by Alex Ros - 11-01-2012, 01:14 AM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by Solipsist - 11-01-2012, 07:03 AM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by 4WalledKid - 11-02-2012, 09:12 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by The chaser - 11-02-2012, 10:01 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by 4WalledKid - 11-02-2012, 10:21 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by The chaser - 11-02-2012, 10:42 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by 4WalledKid - 11-02-2012, 10:52 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by The chaser - 11-02-2012, 11:10 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by 4WalledKid - 11-02-2012, 11:22 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by The chaser - 11-02-2012, 11:23 PM
RE: My First Custom Story DEMO! - by 4WalledKid - 11-02-2012, 11:25 PM



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