(03-04-2013, 07:21 PM)HumiliatioN Wrote: I just finished this. Overall it was pretty good..
My short review:
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There are some nice scares at start, but someones are expected later on.
What I really liked and what you've used:
- Events when you get lost and rooms are little downhill
- Climbing parts, surprising scares
- Disappearing doors and that "Angel event"
- Music
- Few unique scares
What I didn't like:
- Too short
- Lightning
- Not so good mapping, atmosphere pretty dull
- Story lacks in some parts
Overall: Don't get me wrong I enjoyed it and damn I screamed when that last scare appears unexpected scare for sure
Verdict: 7 / 10 Some really well maded scares and enjoyable epic trip to the full of surprises and confusions
You really have potential! Make now new one and longer
Thank you so much. I was afriad people wouldn't like the
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Angel Scare because it includes a markiplier reference, but I tried to keep it light enough that non-fans wouldn't even notice
Sorry about the lighting (Assume that's what you meant by lightning, I didn't put any lightning in. Don't even know how to do that lol)
My focus with this story wasn't really the lighting or mapping or story. I just wanted to learn how to script. I'm getting good at that I think. I've got timers and variables down, and mostly understand If statements (Still have to learn how to do the Else part) now I'm learning switch statement and any other scripting stuff. I'm also learning lighting and particle effects. I plan on completely revamping this level and doing a remake some day where
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In the room right before the angel event, each door that disappears instead leads you to a different area where you have to solve a puzzle in some or escape monster in others and in others learn story events. I want to elaborate a lot on who owned the house before you