A Late Night Drink

[DeAngelo]

Just finished your CS. It was amazing. I'd like to comment on specifics but I shouldn't spoil it for other people. The scripting, however, I have to say was quite wonderful and the ending gave me a heart-attack without throwing a flying naked-guy in my face. Sure, your lighting does need some work and there were a couple clipping errors, but the actual game-play makes up for it and I had enough oil to not go insane from the darkness.

Spoiler below!

The closet within a closet within a closet within a closet within a closet within a closet within a closet within a closet (within a closet) made my day... I thought you were going to spawn a ton of monsters in the room and I'd have nowhere to hide.

If you decide to make more custom stories (please do!) I will definitely play them as well as your final release of this

Thanks. I have some pretty unique ideas in the works for the remake, stuff I'm relatively sure nobody has done before. But I'll make sure I don't release it till my lighting is up to snuff. I'll post here when I'm almost done and maybe you can test it for me

You guys maybe want to elaborate on why you don't like the screens? Cause atm those are pretty insulting comments, explaining why could turn it into useful criticism

No no, I like criticisms.

Guys, As I said earlier, this custom story was 20% me learning HPL Editor and 80% learning how to script. As someone who has made levels in LBP, I already understood the drag-n-drop mechanics of building a level, and as such I didn't spend much time worrying about lighting and whatnot. I do, however, think that for someone who went from knowing literally nothing about scripting to finishing a small level in 3 weeks, I did pretty good in the scripting area. I'm currently working on an extended version of this level that should have much better areas. I'll attach a sample of the work I've done in the area of learning lighting, particle effects, and other stuff. I've still got a ways to go though

I will say however that while you can comment on the screenshots, I'd love you to try out the level itself. It's very short and should take you literally 10-20 minutes start to finish. I've worked really hard on getting good at scripting and I do think it shows