Very Early, very short level. Need Feedback.

**Bonehead** · 05-19-2013, 07:54 PM

This is extremely early in development. I would just like some pointers on atmosphere and whatnot. How the scares are (not many here). Just 100% for feedback here. Has no name currently, like I said, I'm just looking for pointers. Here's the map. Once you've picked up the chemical pot and have left the lab/closet, you are done.

Just so you know, this is all from what I learned in 2 days time. I'm testing the water. I really want to get into this so I'm ready for aamfp. So, all the feedback on can get, links to useful things and whatnot. Scripting is my weak point right now.. but let me know what you think of it.

I've updated the post with a much more elaborate version of the map. Still seeking more feedback. This map's purpose is not to BLOW YOUR MIND. I just started learning 2 days ago, so don't be expecting too much. This is just me trying to cram all of this crap into my head. I've never scripted before nor have I ever even read into it. So yeah. Feedback is great, constructive criticism. Don't be an ass.. but don't sugar coat it.

Updated attatchment.