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Amateur reviewer looking for audience
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RE: Amateur reviewer looking for audience

(08-31-2010, 08:06 PM)Lee Wrote: .....

My voice is very bland unless I'm acting or singing.
Big Grin
I can see it now on Broadway!
"Amnesia: The Opera "
Just watched your review of Amnesia. A good review but too long to keep the average attention span.
If you don't mind the critique...
.. No more then 4 mins - otherwise it becomes a long winded walkthru' with spoilers.
You showed me a lot more of that monster then I saw when I played.
When I played I barely got more than a glimpse or two.

As you are aiming for a reviewers place on Youtube (great!) Keep the reviews shorter or you'll miss an audience that has a shorter attention span, which is probably most viewers.
Overall? Way too long but tons of well worded sentences explaining both the game and it's intent. Well written, clearly spoken and interesting.
Sum it up: You are a good reviewer in need of a good editor.

Jinix ~~~ZiXiZ~~~ OAP
(This post was last modified: 09-20-2010, 07:22 AM by Jinix.)
09-20-2010, 06:39 AM
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Amateur reviewer looking for audience - by Sexbad - 04-07-2010, 01:54 AM
RE: Amateur reviewer looking for audience - by Jinix - 09-20-2010, 06:39 AM



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