Subterranea (Work in Progress - NEED FEEDBACK)

[Soon]

Crabski, I originally wanted to start in the village, but we've all seen how bad outside environments can look with amnesia. It might be worth it if I took the time to make some custom models so I could actually put the doors on the houses and make the houses actual 3D objects you can go inside.

Tyrant, that's good to hear, I wanted that room to be very tense with the notes you find and all the random noises occuring.

Also, what does everyone think of the story so far? Is it just ok or do you actually get anything from it? I am prepared to do rewrites for a lot of the notes if they need it.