Subterranea (Work in Progress - NEED FEEDBACK)

[Soon]

The reason everything looks so "perfectly" put together in almost all the areas is because it is a WIP. I havn't yet had the time to go through and max everything look pretty. I put the notes directly in plain view so people could find them easily. Everything will be moved around if I ever get around to updating more of it. If I spent all that time making everything look pretty before I tested it, I could potentially waste hours of time just to find out it won't work. That being said, I appreciate your feedback but everything you said I already knew about with the exception of the church lighting. You're right that the light would only be coming through one side.

As for the introduction. Yes, the character is a rock climber AND spelunker. I didn't choose this profession to make you assume that you're instantly underground. I did it to give the impression that maybe he was on his way to a rocky cliffside and happened upon the town. Apparently you didn't read most of the intro because I also mention how he's losing daylight and finding bits of wood.