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first or third person?
DRedshot Offline
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first or third person?

I've just started making a custom story, and I was wondering whether you all found it more immersive if the statements which show up onscreen are in first person, or third person. I will add a few examples of some things in my story, with alternatives, could you let me know which version souds better, thanks

example 1:

1: - I can just fit my arm through the bars.
2: - The bars are wide enough to fit an arm.
3: - You can fit your arm through the bars.

example 2:

1: - I can't pick this lock.
2: - This lock cannot be picked.
3: - You can't pick this lock.

07-23-2011, 09:37 PM
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first or third person? - by DRedshot - 07-23-2011, 09:37 PM
RE: first or third person? - by Roenlond - 07-23-2011, 09:45 PM
RE: first or third person? - by DRedshot - 07-23-2011, 10:28 PM
RE: first or third person? - by Streetboat - 07-24-2011, 02:31 AM
RE: first or third person? - by DRedshot - 07-24-2011, 03:25 AM
RE: first or third person? - by ferryadams10 - 07-24-2011, 02:52 PM
RE: first or third person? - by DRedshot - 07-24-2011, 02:57 PM
RE: first or third person? - by Roenlond - 07-24-2011, 03:33 PM
RE: first or third person? - by JoeBradleyUK - 07-25-2011, 12:32 AM
RE: first or third person? - by Henriksen - 07-25-2011, 05:51 AM



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