So I saw a play through on this, there are definitely a few things that could be done better but over all not bad. My only criticism is TONE DOWN THE JUMP SCARES MAN! I know you said in the OP that there were some, but the amount of them was just insane. It was like every map there was at least 3 things that just popped up and screamed at you. I mean one here and there is ok but when you use them that much it takes away from a lot of the tension and ends up just being more annoying than scary. Other than that, the mapping was pretty good, the puzzles were a little odd but still they were a lot better than just having to find a bunch of keys everywhere which seems to be a big mistake among first time custom story makers. I'm not trying to be mean, just trying to give a little helpful criticism