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RE: The Machine

Excellent. Now the story is completely passable. But, I would like a little more scary moments.
Hmmm ... sewerage for example empty. One could add Waterlurker. He began to follow the player from the beginning of the ruined walls and so on to a rope ladder.
Continuation of the story will be? Smile

12-10-2011, 07:33 PM

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The Machine - by Dyloo - 12-04-2011, 07:46 PM

RE: The Machine - by bobbo - 12-04-2011, 09:30 PM

RE: The Machine - by Dyloo - 12-04-2011, 09:38 PM

RE: The Machine - by bobbo - 12-04-2011, 09:46 PM

RE: The Machine - by Danny Boy - 12-04-2011, 09:47 PM

RE: The Machine - by Dyloo - 12-04-2011, 10:00 PM

RE: The Machine - by bobbo - 12-04-2011, 10:16 PM

RE: The Machine - by Dyloo - 12-04-2011, 10:26 PM

RE: The Machine - by bobbo - 12-04-2011, 10:42 PM

RE: The Machine - by dragonwar - 12-04-2011, 10:37 PM

RE: The Machine - by Dyloo - 12-04-2011, 10:42 PM

RE: The Machine - by SierenH - 12-11-2011, 01:07 AM

RE: The Machine - by Kman - 12-11-2011, 01:46 AM

RE: The Machine - by SierenH - 12-11-2011, 01:50 AM

RE: The Machine - by dragonwar - 12-04-2011, 10:51 PM

RE: The Machine - by Gyldenglad - 12-06-2011, 12:54 AM

RE: The Machine - by Tiero - 12-06-2011, 08:57 AM

RE: The Machine - by JMFStorm - 12-06-2011, 09:09 AM

RE: The Machine - by Dyloo - 12-06-2011, 02:41 PM

RE: The Machine - by HumiliatioN - 12-06-2011, 04:03 PM

RE: The Machine - by Gyldenglad - 12-06-2011, 04:47 PM

RE: The Machine - by Dyloo - 12-06-2011, 05:00 PM

RE: The Machine - by Gyldenglad - 12-06-2011, 06:43 PM

RE: The Machine - by AFSStudio - 12-06-2011, 07:50 PM

RE: The Machine - by Gyldenglad - 12-06-2011, 07:54 PM

RE: The Machine - by Dyloo - 12-06-2011, 08:12 PM

RE: The Machine - by Gyldenglad - 12-06-2011, 08:15 PM

RE: The Machine - by Dyloo - 12-06-2011, 08:23 PM

RE: The Machine - by Gyldenglad - 12-06-2011, 08:28 PM

RE: The Machine - by A Tricky Carnie - 12-07-2011, 12:54 AM

RE: The Machine - by Kman - 12-07-2011, 02:51 AM

RE: The Machine - by keeshond5 - 12-07-2011, 11:53 PM

RE: The Machine - by Kman - 12-08-2011, 12:22 AM

RE: The Machine - by dragonwar - 12-08-2011, 01:28 AM

RE: The Machine - by Kman - 12-08-2011, 01:35 AM

RE: The Machine - by WookieMang - 12-08-2011, 09:47 AM

RE: The Machine - by Cryaotic - 12-08-2011, 10:09 AM

RE: The Machine - by Dyloo - 12-08-2011, 11:59 AM

RE: The Machine - by Niggenaggex - 12-08-2011, 03:59 PM

RE: The Machine - by Wooderson - 12-08-2011, 06:34 PM

RE: The Machine - by Dyloo - 12-09-2011, 12:16 AM

RE: The Machine - by Kman - 12-09-2011, 01:43 AM

RE: The Machine - by WookieMang - 12-09-2011, 07:04 AM

RE: The Machine - by Dyloo - 12-09-2011, 05:51 PM

RE: The Machine - by WookieMang - 12-09-2011, 11:41 PM

RE: The Machine - by Taylordboii - 12-10-2011, 07:04 AM

RE: The Machine - by WookieMang - 12-10-2011, 08:08 AM

RE: The Machine - by Kman - 12-10-2011, 08:25 AM

RE: The Machine - by Dyloo - 12-10-2011, 12:24 PM

RE: The Machine - by downquark - 12-10-2011, 02:08 PM

RE: The Machine - by Dyloo - 12-10-2011, 02:33 PM

RE: The Machine - by downquark - 12-10-2011, 03:54 PM

RE: The Machine - by Technobrain - 12-10-2011, 04:21 PM

RE: The Machine - by Rapture - 12-10-2011, 04:53 PM

RE: The Machine - by WookieMang - 12-10-2011, 09:09 PM

RE: The Machine - by Ivan4ik - 12-10-2011, 07:33 PM

RE: The Machine - by JenniferOrange - 12-10-2011, 10:11 PM

RE: The Machine - by SierenH - 12-10-2011, 10:24 PM

RE: The Machine - by CrowdOfOne - 12-11-2011, 06:39 PM

RE: The Machine - by SurvivorsDead - 12-13-2011, 09:30 AM

RE: The Machine - by PewDiePie - 12-13-2011, 10:48 AM

RE: The Machine - by Dyloo - 12-13-2011, 01:39 PM

RE: The Machine - by SierenH - 12-14-2011, 03:14 AM

RE: The Machine - by Deckard - 12-17-2011, 04:12 PM

RE: The Machine - by kartanonperuna - 12-19-2011, 08:40 PM

RE: The Machine - by Dyloo - 12-19-2011, 10:42 PM

RE: The Machine - by kartanonperuna - 12-20-2011, 07:34 AM

RE: The Machine - by I ZapZap I - 12-20-2011, 01:35 AM

RE: The Machine - by KenOfAllTrades - 12-21-2011, 05:37 PM

RE: The Machine - by madkeim - 12-22-2011, 05:15 PM

RE: The Machine - by Leu Radu - 01-05-2012, 02:59 AM

RE: The Machine - by Dyloo - 01-05-2012, 12:18 PM

RE: The Machine - by Dyloo - 02-25-2012, 12:34 AM

RE: The Machine - by kartanonperuna - 02-27-2012, 01:01 AM

RE: The Machine - by Alex Ros - 11-20-2012, 10:09 PM

RE: The Machine - by KingCrimson - 11-24-2012, 05:25 AM

RE: The Machine - by Alex Ros - 11-24-2012, 04:05 PM

RE: The Machine - by Drakostyle - 12-02-2012, 08:36 PM

RE: The Machine - by CorinthianMerchant - 12-03-2012, 06:49 AM

RE: The Machine - by Hardarm - 12-03-2012, 02:37 PM

RE: The Machine - by Drakostyle - 12-03-2012, 03:26 PM

RE: The Machine - by Statyk - 12-03-2012, 07:53 PM

RE: The Machine - by Alex Ros - 12-05-2012, 08:31 PM

RE: The Machine - by KansIan - 01-12-2013, 05:46 AM

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RE: The Machine - by KansIan - 01-12-2013, 09:13 AM

RE: The Machine - by Dyloo - 01-26-2013, 09:17 PM

RE: The Machine - by Crafted - 01-27-2013, 03:51 PM

RE: The Machine - by ObtainerGames - 02-03-2013, 04:04 PM

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