[WIP] Recidivus

[Greven]

(This is my first custom story)

Story
The year is 1306. The age where magic was dominant in usage of power, lighting and energy overall.
Your name is Adam. You're a 25-year old male who is working for a duke named Adrian in the town of Boule D'amont. Adam works as a local gardener and has known Adrian since he was about 5 years old, thanks to his parents' connections to Adrians'.

Adam and Adrian were much alike in many ways which is why Adrian gave so much attention to him.
Adrian offered him women, servants, wealth and a good job. But being the humble and innocent person, Adam declined the propositions and took up the task of being the towns local gardener, because he liked being outside and meeting the local people.

One day while Adam was doing one of Adrians ”unusual” jobs, in this case fetching him what seemed like a blue magic-imbued piece of glass, he felt like he's being watched from somewhere. Disregarding his unsettling feelings, he continues towards the room the piece of glass is located. As he enters the room where the piece is, he hears the door slam shut behind him and as he turns around he soon feels an electric impulse throughout his entire body before he goes completely numb. The last thing he remembers is feeling a knife stuck in between his ribs and seeing the face of a young woman with a brown robe on as she bends down over you crying saying "I'm sorry".

As you can probably read from the title of the story you can probably guess whats going to happen next.

What can i expect from this story?:

• No random unlogical jumpscares (As I detest jumpscares and things that are illogical)
• A unique story with intriguing enviroments
  
• Lots of voice acting
• Adrenaline pumping scares
  
• Some community made custom models from some of the communities best
  

Progress:
- Mapping 60%
- Scripting 5%
- Voice acting 0%
- Story 99.9999%


Im writing this thread because I want some critisism on the story and the screens that will be posted in the near future.

Screenshots:

Spoiler below!

A trailer of the custom story will be up soon

"Please let me know what you think" -Gabe Newell.