Young Male Voice Actor Needed

[Acies]

I just sent you a message, Miss Rigi
It's kind of my first time voice acting.

If anyone else wants to hear and maybe give me feedback, you're more than welcome.
http://soundcloud.com/mathiasgebuhr/youn...-voice-act

By the way - the background noise was my fan.
It's fixed now and there is total silence in my room, hehe.

Don't take this hard (don't want you to be afraid of voiceacting in the future)!

You start off with a "normal accent of english". All is well. Then as soon as the voice-acting starts you switch into this guy:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SRH-Ywpz1_I

Just the fact that you forget "Does it ever occur to you how ridiculous all of this is?" in this sentence makes it more funny :>

Try to tone it down, and do a sample with your "normal voice" (which to me seemed perfectly fine).