Grimorium Verum

**bagobonez** · 08-01-2012, 10:45 PM

(08-01-2012, 06:46 PM)HumiliatioN Wrote: What a pleasant surprise for a story. Good job.

Thanks! I was worried it would get bad reviews since it's my first CS!

(08-01-2012, 09:31 PM)Tommyboypsp Wrote: Really nice custom story! Why did you name the characters this way though?

Why did I name the characters what way? I kept the main character named Daniel because when I began making this, I wasn't sure if there might be some dialogue from the main game that I would borrow that would refer to the main character as Daniel, so I didn't want a conflict there. As for the others, it's just what came up when I was thinking of names.

(08-01-2012, 06:31 PM)Anxt Wrote: I played through it, and here's what I thought:

There were a few clipping textures, though overall not too bad.

There were some areas which REALLY needed welders, particularly in the cellarbase area.

The story was ok, though it was HIGHLY reminiscent of the main game, both in character names and general premise.

Atmosphere was good overall, though despite using new music, I don't think it really fit with the environments. Billboards were done well, though the lighting was not too great, particularly due to the lack of point lights in association with spotlights from windows and such.

Overall I'd say a 7/10, it was good, but there are several points that could use improvement.

Thanks... it was my first CS and the lab was one of the first areas I worked on. I suppose I could have gone back later and tried to improve things more as I got better at mapping. Out of curiosity, what areas had texture clipping? I could've sworn I looked at everything and haven't found any.