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Work in progress New Monster (Slime?)
crisosphinx Offline
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RE: New Monster (Slime?)

You know, I'm impressed by your concept of adding a slime to Amnesia; however, it doesn't feel like it would be part of the world. You have to remember that everything must coincide.

Sorry, but here is a little critique:
  • Something about it's walk looks extremely awkward and impossible (it should crawl if anything, I'd assume).
  • I think it should be re-textured (there is a ton of texture stretching, so some extra faces/ edgeloops are in order).
  • You should probably do alpha maps instead of hard modeling for the trails of the character.
  • Make the character more smooth (it's blocky head is odd for a slime... a slime is... well.. slimy! XD It's a ball of slime, not a blocky of slime ;] )
  • The weight-painting looks bad, from what I can tell. It looks like it's moving too much of one area (if it's joints are moving out too far, that might be the reason why).
  • Last, but not least, you have some very interesting mouth slime-stretching. Make sure to blend in the areas that are... well... visible. It looks like the slime-strands are on top of the mouth, not in it. ;]
I'd suggest fixing it, but you've done a lot of work thus far. Is it fully animated at the time being? O:

Animation and Rig questions -> crisosphinx@yahoo.com

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09-24-2012, 06:10 PM
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New Monster (Slime?) - by Vyzor - 09-23-2012, 07:26 PM
RE: New Monster (Slime?) - by Mooserider - 09-24-2012, 09:05 AM
RE: New Monster (Slime?) - by Mine Turtle - 09-24-2012, 09:27 AM
RE: New Monster (Slime?) - by Vyzor - 09-24-2012, 02:00 PM
RE: New Monster (Slime?) - by xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx - 09-24-2012, 02:30 PM
RE: New Monster (Slime?) - by crisosphinx - 09-24-2012, 06:10 PM
RE: New Monster (Slime?) - by Robby - 09-24-2012, 07:14 PM
RE: New Monster (Slime?) - by Vyzor - 09-24-2012, 09:14 PM
RE: New Monster (Slime?) - by Statyk - 09-24-2012, 09:17 PM
RE: New Monster (Slime?) - by xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx - 09-25-2012, 10:46 AM
RE: New Monster (Slime?) - by Kreekakon - 09-25-2012, 10:47 AM
RE: New Monster (Slime?) - by Robby - 09-25-2012, 11:46 AM
RE: New Monster (Slime?) - by crisosphinx - 09-25-2012, 02:50 PM
RE: New Monster (Slime?) - by Robby - 09-25-2012, 03:20 PM
RE: New Monster (Slime?) - by Vyzor - 10-07-2012, 09:52 PM
RE: New Monster (Slime?) - by Statyk - 10-08-2012, 12:07 AM
RE: New Monster (Slime?) - by Vyzor - 10-08-2012, 01:20 AM
RE: New Monster (Slime?) - by Statyk - 10-08-2012, 01:57 AM



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