"Castle - Office" - Custom Main Menu (REDONE)

[The chaser]

Sincerely, I find it quite bad:

-The windows are blueish, while the light is yellow
-Why is there a cabinet in front of a window?
-The dead body is unnatural: The right arm should be affected by gravity, but it stands in the air. (The model is static)
-The roof is weirdly illuminated: A part is illuminated but the other not, why?
-The tiling is too big

Conclusion: You have to work your levelling a lot more. +, without the grunt and body it would be better.
I see a good future if your work better, though.