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RE: The locked door

(02-14-2013, 02:50 PM)JustAnotherPlayer Wrote: I have to say a few things;
Naming it "The locked door" isn't a good custom story name.
Story matters. Why do you have to safe your father? How come Mark knew all hell breaks loose or whether his father gone? What is in the content of the tomb? Who's tomb is it? Using these, the player will got mysterious things...
Also, on your second screenshot....
Spoiler below!

USE A POINTLIGHT, DAMMIT!


I understand, and I'll try to rewrite most of it. I still want to keep most of it a secret though. I've been thinking about another, better name, so I'll change that soon. Thanks for your feedback!

EDIT: New story and better screenshots, thank you!
(This post was last modified: 02-14-2013, 04:59 PM by OriginalUsername.)
02-14-2013, 04:15 PM
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Moghrub's Tale - by OriginalUsername - 02-14-2013, 02:00 PM
RE: The locked door - by PutraenusAlivius - 02-14-2013, 02:50 PM
RE: The locked door - by OriginalUsername - 02-14-2013, 04:15 PM
RE: Moghrub's Tale - by FlawlessHappiness - 02-14-2013, 05:04 PM
RE: Moghrub's Tale - by OriginalUsername - 02-14-2013, 05:16 PM
RE: Moghrub's Tale - by Brosive - 02-14-2013, 05:28 PM
RE: Moghrub's Tale - by OriginalUsername - 02-14-2013, 05:30 PM
RE: Moghrub's Tale - by OriginalUsername - 02-17-2013, 10:57 AM
RE: Moghrub's Tale - by Kreekakon - 02-17-2013, 01:51 PM
RE: Moghrub's Tale - by OriginalUsername - 02-17-2013, 04:34 PM
RE: Moghrub's Tale - by Brosive - 02-17-2013, 10:03 PM
RE: Moghrub's Tale - by OriginalUsername - 02-18-2013, 03:51 PM
RE: Moghrub's Tale - by OriginalUsername - 02-20-2013, 12:57 PM
RE: Moghrub's Tale - by Brosive - 02-23-2013, 10:19 PM
RE: Moghrub's Tale - by OriginalUsername - 02-23-2013, 10:57 PM
RE: Moghrub's Tale - by OriginalUsername - 03-01-2013, 06:38 PM
RE: Moghrub's Tale - by OriginalUsername - 03-16-2013, 01:04 AM
RE: Moghrub's Tale - by PutraenusAlivius - 03-17-2013, 08:56 AM
RE: Moghrub's Tale - by OriginalUsername - 03-17-2013, 01:08 PM
RE: Moghrub's Tale - by PutraenusAlivius - 03-17-2013, 01:16 PM
RE: Moghrub's Tale - by OriginalUsername - 03-17-2013, 01:19 PM
RE: Moghrub's Tale - by PutraenusAlivius - 03-17-2013, 03:45 PM
RE: Moghrub's Tale - by OriginalUsername - 03-25-2013, 11:03 AM



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