Amnesia: A Machine For Pigs Discussion Topic Part 2

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Quite a bad poem in my opinion. The last line just sounds wrong when read it.

What's wrong with the poem? You do know that poems don't have to rhyme right?

I know that poems doesn't necessarily have to rhyme it's just that it sounds off. Like someone playing on a piano and ends the song with the wrong note.

I fail to see how exactly it sounds off, the only way it would sound off is if you try to use some sort of inflection to make the end rhyme, other than that it seems to be perfectly fine.