Amnesia: A Machine For Pigs Discussion Topic Part 2

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i can see why people think it's structured poorly cause the way it's set up the last word every other line rhymes with dead 3 times consecutively but then instead of rounding it off to 8 lines they cut it off at 7 and end the 7th line with another rhyme with dead (also repeating the last word of the 6th line) and it fucks up the structure and sounds really clunky

yes poems don't need to rhyme but they set the entire thing up with a rhyme scheme and then sort of just dropped it at the end, you could only really justify that if none of it rhymed

A lot of poems are like that, just because there's rhyming in it doesn't mean that it has to be consistent. It's more a matter of understanding the mood, I think the poem is fine but like I said, it might be the way you're reading it.