Amnesia: A Machine For Pigs Discussion Topic Part 2

[Tesseract]

i don't really care what other people think of it but you're honestly just being blinded by fanboyism if you still can't understand why people might think it sounded awkward or think it was poorly written after i gave that entire explanation

I don't think it's a matter of 'fanboyism' it's just a matter of interpretation, I can see how someone may find it clunky but it's in the way you phrase it.

Sure it may not be the most profound poem but it's a poem that has meaning - or will have meaning.