Music Discussion thread

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Hello guys,

When I have some time over I like to compose some electronic tracks.
Currently I'm interested in ambient game music.

http://snd.sc/14WXNo9

Sure, nothing special at all, but if you like it, I'd like to do some more.
Would like to offer it all for some people who are making CS or own (horror) video-games.

I'd be pleased to hear some thoughts about it.

New: http://snd.sc/15dfJix
Maybe something for the beginning, when someone speaks some notes or the storyline in Costum Stories

This stuff is by no means bad but it is quite generic and uninteresting. There was some cool textural stuff going on in "Message of the Bereaved" but it had so much more potential. There are literally millions of directions you can take that simple but well defined soundscape but in the end you didn't really do anything with it. In my opinion the snare drum/hihat are wildly inappropriate here. I'd substitute the snare drum with a timpano and maybe have the low strings double it at 01:10. As for the hi-hat I'd remove it completely. In my opinion it ruins the fluid atmosphere you're (presumably) trying to create by having the hi-hat play straight quarter notes. I think it should sound somewhat timeless. Otherwise I just recommend utilizing every instrument in the modern orchestra so that you can have a wider array of textures available.