[SPOILER] Plot Discussion Thread *Spoiler Alert*

[samueljustice00]

Fell flat on its face when it introduced magic. Then kept falling again again, with crap like ancient aztec piramids or what ever and future vision.

Would be 10x better if it stayed in the real of an Frankenstein story.

Plot 3/10, writing 7/10. Overall 5/10 at best.

Magic? Okay.. I think you may have misunderstood the story. Unless you were a wizard all along.