[REQUEST] What could I do better in my CS?

[serbusfish]

Now that's a pretty good reply despite you not actually playing the story

Good advice on the monster, when I originally made the story I didnt want to introduce one too early but in retrospect I left it too long (over an hour into the story) but I will make sure the build up + execution makes sense rather than stick one in for the sake of it.

I am fairly happy with the level design, but stuff like pacing, scares, sounds, etc im open to making changes to if needs be.