Abandoned Town (Community Project)

[Nikson.]

Yes you can participate multiple times c:
As long as no new-comers are waiting for the map to become available (since it wouldn't be fair to steal the chance from anyone else).

As for criticism...

Spoiler below!

Your layouts look pretty good and I like the amount of detail you're putting in c: A lot of starters forget to detail their maps, so it's nice to see someone paying attention to the little things!

That said, there are some things you could improve - for example, the fog particles shouldn't stand out too much or clip through objects (such as the floor and book shelves) when possible. I find lowering their alpha to around .5 or .75 helps a lot with this.

On the topic of opaque objects, this same criticism applies to your billboards. While billboards can look amazing and very sexy, you should try to remember that they're actually light rays created by light bouncing off of dust particles in the air (or lens flares/bloom effects), so they shouldn't be drastically strong.

Another thing to note is that the ceiling in your first area is pitch black (despite ample light around the rest of the room). Try to make sure that there aren't "black holes" in your map (even some very dim point lights would be a vast improvement)

Thank you Kia, that was very helpful! Do you voice act? Because I would need it for ky mod since the voice actress that I've chosen doesn't write back. If you don't voice act, do you know a female voice actress maybe?