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Breach - A short playable story
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RE: Breach - A short playable story

Good map; the construction is just fine, remember that not only is decoration with objects important, but also lighting, you could do wonders to make that "pop" a little more.

I think, (this applies to a few other stories as well, I'm sure) if this map is ever revisited, the diary-text should be less subjective; the "Oh I dread this place" entry in the beginning sort of disagreed with what I felt, and made a disconnection between me and the protagonist. Just a little thing to think about :)

07-04-2011, 06:57 AM
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Breach - A short playable story - by Placeable - 11-10-2010, 01:29 PM
RE: Breach - A short playable story - by RENCAMO - 11-11-2010, 11:37 PM
RE: Breach - A short playable story - by Everlone - 11-12-2010, 02:37 PM
RE: Breach - A short playable story - by nofsky - 11-13-2010, 06:19 PM
RE: Breach - A short playable story - by Kurton - 07-04-2011, 06:57 AM
RE: Breach - A short playable story - by Tenno - 07-04-2011, 07:29 AM
RE: Breach - A short playable story - by vanjavk - 07-05-2011, 01:54 PM
RE: Breach - A short playable story - by huseyin - 12-07-2011, 05:49 PM
RE: Breach - A short playable story - by Kman - 12-07-2011, 10:33 PM
RE: Breach - A short playable story - by Skashi - 12-07-2011, 07:19 PM



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