Abduction Chapter 1

[Anxt]

I would like to know what made the beginning of the story bad, as I always welcome feedback. I am glad it got better for you, though.

Spoiler below!

Because basically nothing happened before the first monster just suddenly scared me, and at least I found no apparent reason for the monster taking me to a prison instead of just killing me.

At least I think that's what the reason is. I'm not 100% sure anymore though.

If you have not yet finished the story, it will probably become more clear later on.

Spoiler below!

The lack of anything happening during the time before the first encounter is intentional, it is meant to be reflective of waking up in the middle of the night, everything is turned off, quiet, empty. In my opinion, sometimes the scariest sounds and events can be the ones that aren't even there.