Pros: The story sounds good and the basic layout of the map has a nice feel to it
Cons: Flickering textures (meaning the textures overlap eachother) Some paintings are 1 dm away from the wall, the painting covering the key is not covering it, no ambient lighting (no dark pointlights), Same music is just repeating (have a little variety)
Some tips: Instead of making the monster appear infront of the player make sounds and noises indicating that "something is here" it gives more of a thrill.
Other than that good first map and looking forward for its release