To Give Is To Force

[convolution223]

I hate the placenment of the monsters.. Also there are too much of them.
That made me rage quit

i thought that too... haha at one point when i was in the starting room after i exited the whom i finally saw the key on the chair so i ran for it past the brute only to be attacked by a justine monster (well it was a hallucination, but still) and then got chased back to the room by the brute only to find when i shut the door on him a grunt had spawned like 5 feet away from me in that very room. i made it, but i must say it was the first time i've gotten vocal in fear/frustration while i wasn't playing with friends . but still i loved this one, i kinda just stopped paying attention to the story after a while because i think i kept getting the notes out of order. i might go back to right before i did the ritual and read all the notes to understand it better some time soon.

I'm sorry but at the same time i've got a grin across my face. certain monsters can be triggered by doing different things (like picking up and throwing the star in the first room, or if u die, a monster spawns in a random spot but he just waits there, for atmospheric purposes, and so something like this is less likely to happen) so u must've triggered every monster, which is pretty awesome.

i'll keep this feedback in mind for next time. For this though, I wanted to have that fear and adrenaline rush that comes from being chased by monsters, because personally, those were the parts that scared me the most in Amnesia.

And please tell me what you think of the story if/when you go back and read them. It's meant to be interpreted, but as I've said before, there were a few possibilities I had written that I wanted to imply. And thanks for playing and posting! Glad you liked it!

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If the footage turns out good I will put it up, either on my channel or for my sponser.

sponser? interesting... do elaborate.

and send me a link if/when u do.