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The escape chapter one
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The Escape Chapter One:
Features
  • No Naked Teleported Guys
  • Detailed Maps!!! Smile
  • Puzzles
  • Story Line
  • Good Scripts
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Story :
You Woke up in a chamber with no memory at all , but you woke up in a weird prison....escape the horror!!!!!
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To Check the LiveStream Go AT! THIS LINK
Screenshots comes later !!! Smile
A Trailer Comes later
Beta Tester : SUMMER^^

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06-26-2012, 04:42 PM
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RE: The escape chapter one

i can hardly even consider calling that a story.

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06-26-2012, 05:15 PM
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RE: The escape chapter one

Give him a chance guys, i've watched his livestream once and he actually spent time detailing levels Smile

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06-26-2012, 06:17 PM
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even so, the levels wont mean anything without a solid story..

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06-26-2012, 06:32 PM
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RE: The escape chapter one

(06-26-2012, 06:32 PM)darkadders Wrote: even so, the levels wont mean anything without a solid story..

Well, a first custom story doesen't make him a professional now does it? I'm sure he'll develop further on after this. Learning from your own mistakes is the best thing in my opinion.

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06-26-2012, 06:33 PM
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RE: The escape chapter one

''Fatures Story Line.

Story :

You Woke up in a chamber with no memory at all , but you woke up in a weird prison....escape the horror!!!!!''

I'm sorry sir, but that is NOT a story.
06-26-2012, 08:40 PM
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Amnesia




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06-26-2012, 08:47 PM
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RE: The escape chapter one

Eh.. yep that's not even a storyline.

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06-26-2012, 08:47 PM
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RE: The escape chapter one

(06-26-2012, 06:33 PM)CrazyArts Wrote:
(06-26-2012, 06:32 PM)darkadders Wrote: even so, the levels wont mean anything without a solid story..

Well, a first custom story doesen't make him a professional now does it? I'm sure he'll develop further on after this. Learning from your own mistakes is the best thing in my opinion.
I'm sorry but I'm sick of people using their age and "it's my first story!" as excuses for crappy quality. That's no excuse, if you really need an example look at Afraid of Monsters. That was made by a 12 year old and it was his first mod ever, and it won mod of the year the year it came out and is still commonly regarded as one of the best horror mods out there. If you need something Amnesia related, look at White Night, that was Tan's first mod and people say it's one of the best custom stories there is.

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06-26-2012, 09:50 PM
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RE: The escape chapter one

let me get this straight. IF THIS WAS his first custom story, which is isnt: "the unsubscribe killer", it does NOT justify the lack of storyline. a CS with lack of a somewhat decent storyline could mainly be classified as an unserious map, if the creator decides to release it. frankly, im SO SICK of people using an "amnesia" storyline. in "amnesia" storyline cases; and i promise you this; 95% of the cases of these stories, you never know WHAT the fuck got the character to where he started, or WHY the fuck hes there in the first place. these stories are so faked, copied and stolen from other people. stolen, as in using the same things all over again. jumpscares; keyhunts, crowbarbreaking of doors; CLIMBING THROUGH A CASUAL CAVERN OF ROCK; etc.

even though this guy puts work into his mapping (which i cannot say for sure yet, but ill take your word on it for now), it will be absolutely USELESS unless he actually makes a functional, solid "exposition", "Rising action", "Climax", "Falling action", and "resolution" type of story. those principles build up a SHORT story; and it should be in every custom story out there. making a custom story only based on scaring people without reason and without sense; would IMO be worse than not making a custom story at all.

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