Amnesia - Dwayne's Delectable Dinner

[Le0nLP]

Just played and recorded it! Have to say the story was really well made! Nice Level Design I really liked the big hall or whatever it was. But in my opinion there were to many ways and doors. This was a bit confusing. But trough reading all notes it wasn't a problem to find the right way in the end.

Am I allowed to use the screen in the first post as a thumbnail?

Yes you can! What is your youtube channel?

Le0nLP but my videos are in german. Today im going to upload the first part!

[Korama]

looks interesting, i'll mgive it a shot!

[HumiliatioN]

Finished it took my 45 minutes to finish. One of my favourite map was that Large torture hall, really nicely maded and overall this was pretty decent story, but not awesome.

I give you 6.5/10

Spoiler below!

Flaws:

- There are some clipping textures
- Too many monster spawns, ruins the atmosphere
- No brainstorming puzzles only collecting keys almost..

What I liked:

- Epic music
- Mapping
- Some rooms are nicely maded, not professionally, but farily good.

Well done. I enjoyed it

[ShiningBlader]

Just played and recorded it! Have to say the story was really well made! Nice Level Design I really liked the big hall or whatever it was. But in my opinion there were to many ways and doors. This was a bit confusing. But trough reading all notes it wasn't a problem to find the right way in the end.

Am I allowed to use the screen in the first post as a thumbnail?

Yes you can! What is your youtube channel?

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What about jumpscares?

I don't find jump scares too appealing, but a few are all right, but if they're overdone, I find it a bad way of getting spooked by a story.

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I personally think that it is better not have any jumpscare at all, at least without proper foreshadowing, as it completely breaks the mood otherwise.

And when I face one, I usually think "better not pay much attention anymore. If the creator did it once, he can do it again..."

And I'm always right on that. One spends the whole time waiting for a jumpscare rather than immersing him/herself in the story. It ruins everything...

(unless the story is kinda like the house of horror series and relies only on jumpscares but that is the kind of CSs that I'd rather avoid)

[PutraenusAlivius]

Wanna make it better? Well, use these things;
"Make sure little to no monster are spawning. Ruins the immersion and makes the player to frustate."
"Focus more on atmosphere. It all depends on story and atmosphere."
"Change the title. It looks comedy instead of horror."
"Add a tough puzzle using a story. Players liek tough puzzles."

Hope these things will make your cs very good. I'm sorry, but i gotta use the italics. They're too funny.

[KiraImmortal]

no complex puzzles, a bit strange atmosphere sometimes, but all in all a great mod i really enjoyed it, 9/10 ^^

[Slanderous]

I have the feeling naming it Dwayne's Delectable Dinner isn't a good name for a custom story.

It's perfect name for porn story.

Badumtss

[PutraenusAlivius]

I have the feeling naming it Dwayne's Delectable Dinner isn't a good name for a custom story.

It's perfect name for porn story.

Badumtss

*dying*