Amnesia Custom Storie

[Babyforce]

Hello everyone. I post this because i've finally release my first Custom Storie for Amnesia : The Dark Descent "The lightning shadow".

You woke up in a strange room and you don't know who you are. A "thing" is watching you. The only thing you know is you have a heart problem who can immobilize you in critical moments. Can you escape of this strange mansion ? This is my first Custom Story for Amnesia : The Dark Descent. Sorry for my bad English, i'm French. If anyone do a video of my Custom Story, i invit them to post the link of their video and their opinion.

Maintenant en français : Ceci est ma première Custom Story pour Amnesia : The Dark Descent. Si quelqu'un fait une vidéo sur ma Custom Story, je vous invite à laisser le lien de votre vidéo dans les commentaires et de laisser votre avis dessus. Vous vous réveillez dans une salle et vous ne savez plus qui vous êtes. Quelque chose vous observe. La seule chose dont vous vous rappelez est que vous avez un problème cardiaque qui peut vous immobiliser dans des moments critiques. Arriverez vous à vous échapper de cette maison ?

This Custom Storie have a French traduction (By me =p) and an English traduction (By me too).
This Custom Storie is 100% working, all items have a description and i made this alone (So i've took a long time to do this). Made by love of course.

Moddb link : http://www.moddb.com/mods/the-lightning-shadow
Mega link : https://mega.co.nz/#!j5JzzYrL!egUrhUsYq9...OdOf2nmpFs
Mediafire link : http://www.mediafire.com/download/igsn8s...dow_V1.rar

"Thanks and have fun" Say Gabe Newell

[DnALANGE]

Here is my revieuw :
when starting the map, WHY are you locked in your own room and WHY is there a crowbar? doesn't make any sense to me..
The first encounter bugged my game already! WHY didn't you make a checkpoint there? grunt killed me and he didnt spawn again.. so he didn't broke the door!
For the rest of the game : WAY too many grunts \ encounters!
PICKUP ITEM = almost all the time encounter!
Try to make less of those encounters and make the game more scary with like : SOUNDS \ particles etc..
That key in the first room with : i should hold this key.. IF people don't find this key... they won't ever finish the game.. DON'T make those kind of things unless you know what you are doing! OR give hints\quests for that..
Mapping was good to me..
Specially for first story.
A little bit empty but heey, first story!..
Good use of diferent items, liked that!
the only BIG issue is ENGLISH \ translation!
Damn that was bad!, NEXT time before you upload let someone else do the grammar!!!
Overall rating : 5\10

[Babyforce]

Here is my revieuw :
when starting the map, WHY are you locked in your own room and WHY is there a crowbar? doesn't make any sense to me..
The first encounter bugged my game already! WHY didn't you make a checkpoint there? grunt killed me and he didnt spawn again.. so he didn't broke the door!
For the rest of the game : WAY too many grunts \ encounters!
PICKUP ITEM = almost all the time encounter!
Try to make less of those encounters and make the game more scary with like : SOUNDS \ particles etc..
That key in the first room with : i should hold this key.. IF people don't find this key... they won't ever finish the game.. DON'T make those kind of things unless you know what you are doing! OR give hints\quests for that..
Mapping was good to me..
Specially for first story.
A little bit empty but heey, first story!..
Good use of diferent items, liked that!
the only BIG issue is ENGLISH \ translation!
Damn that was bad!, NEXT time before you upload let someone else do the grammar!!!
Overall rating : 5\10

Sorry but i've put a checkpoint and when you will be kill, the grunt re-spawn (Sometimes, monsters are not spawning, it's not my fault). For the character room, this is not his room. He just wake up in a mysterious mansion. For the grunts, i put what i want in my Custom Storie and i want you to be afraid from the beginning until the end (generaly, Custom Storie begin slowly, here, it begin quickly). For the sounds and particles i don't know were i can put this and this is my first Custom Storie, i've work alone on this (So it take lot of time). For the items, you need that. The key without tag is not requiered to finish the game, i've put two end. For the bad English, I SAY I'M NOT ENGLISH AND I AM NOT BILINGUAL. T'as qu'a parler français non mais