ERROR MESSAGE! custom story fix? pls help

[Radical Batz]

Whenever I load my custom story, it keeps getting this error message saying "FATAL ERROR: Could not load script file
'custom_stories/ThereMustBeaWayOut/maps/ch01/ThereMustBeaWayOut.hps'! main (8,10): ERR : Expected '('

and first the description of my custom story appeared but then after it did not!!!!!!!!

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//so this is my hps file, is there something wrong I did?///
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void PickupKey(string &in asEntity, string &in asItem)
{
AddQuest("quest1", "TestQuest");
AddUseItemCallback("", "Bedroom Key", "bedroomdoor","Use Bedroom Key", true);

}

void Use Bedroom Key(string &in asItem, string &in asEntity)
{
SetMessage("message", "message1", 3);
}

[7heDubz]

Okay! I'm big on learning for yourself so, The error they give a point. A Y and an X value. The 8 is the Y meaning that on the 8th line of code (down from the top) there is an error. Look on that line for your error. Then, the X value, 10. 10 Character over your error lies.

Best of luck!

[Romulator]

Okay! I'm big on learning for yourself so, The error they give a point. A Y and an X value. The 8 is the Y meaning that on the 8th line of code (down from the top) there is an error. Look on that line for your error. Then, the X value, 10. 10 Character over your error lies.

Best of luck!

Actually, I do not think this will help here. Regardless, heed this advice. It will help you with errors later on, and if the co-ordinates are not where the error is located, it is somewhere after.

If you still cannot find it, unspoiler here

Spoiler below!

Code:
What I think your issue is the void. I do not think you can use spaces there. Otherwise it seems to be okay. Try this instead:

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void PickupKey(string &in asEntity, string &in asItem)
{
AddQuest("quest1", "TestQuest");
AddUseItemCallback("", "Bedroom Key", "bedroomdoor","UseBedroomKey", true); //Changed so it points to the void
}

void UseBedroomKey(string &in asItem, string &in asEntity) //Removed spaces
{
SetMessage("message", "message1", 3.0f); //Changed to a float. Wont cause errors either way.
} 


As for the description of your story, could you please post your extra_english.lang file below? One error in that causes everything to error, hence the message above in UseBedroomKey won't work either.