Great, looks promising i'd love to try it out... BUT!
A story, getting out of there? Well son, who hasnt made a campaign where u wanna get OUT! ;D
I suggest making a slightly different story, a unique one

Like for example, going deeper into hell to find ur wife who seems to be screaming from deep withing the... dungeon, for example... and in the end, u end up BECOMING a monster? not exactly that if u dont want to (because making a female body model might be a pain, and there would be shitloads of scripting etc

), but u get the idea...
Just a tip, advice... suggestion! Thats the word i was looking for ;D
Love ya <3