(11-28-2016, 04:38 AM)CarnivorousJelly Wrote: This looks incredibly familiar... you wouldn't happen to have posted a screenshot of this hallway in the Screenshot Criticism Thread about two or three years ago, would you? I feel like I made some kind of joke about flying an aeroplane down that wide hallway.
Anyways, looking good! Inexperience doesn't necessarily mean bad and, if you're open to critique, I'll gladly help you out!
I really posted this one on Screenshot Criticism thread like more than 1 year ago though, and you made that joke lol
but I cancelled the work on the story and when I was be able to start doing stuff again, I decided to finish the first part and for the future I'm planning much more series, belonging to this main one
, I hope that you will play it too!
and yea I'm open to critique xD