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Unnamed Story - [WIP]
Gamemakingdude Offline
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Unnamed Story - [WIP]

This is my first story and i've spent 3 days on it so far.

Screenie 1:
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Screenie 2: [Image: 90oex4.png]

Screenie 3:[Image: 11lrdqq.png]

Basically the storyline is to try and escape from the place without going insane (of course)


Suggestions are welcome to add to the story/map.
I'm also gonna try to add more detail


The following things i need help are:

Levers
An item colliding with an enemy (an enemy can disappear with this item colliding with them)
Decals (like for the windows.)

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Stephanos house
(This post was last modified: 11-10-2010, 01:02 AM by Gamemakingdude.)
11-09-2010, 11:49 PM
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Tottel Offline
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RE: Unnamed Story - [WIP]

EDIT: You've edited your main post, no need for me to give away spoilers now ^^

Looking forward to more pics. You should add some more detail to your scenes, but that top one looks quite ok already. The chandeliers are weirdly placed though.
Maybe a tip: Think of the purposes of the rooms first. I'm not sure what this is, it looks somewhat like a dining room, combined with some others. :p
(This post was last modified: 11-10-2010, 01:13 AM by Tottel.)
11-10-2010, 12:54 AM
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Gamemakingdude Offline
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RE: Unnamed Story - [WIP]

I guess i should edit this...

[Edit]
I edited the post and hidden spoilers. Please edit your post!
(11-10-2010, 12:54 AM)Tottel Wrote: EDIT: You've edited your main post, no need for me to give away spoilers now ^^

Looking forward to more pics. You should add some more detail to your scenes, but that top one looks quite ok already. The chandeliers are weirdly placed though.
Maybe a tip: Think of the purposes of the rooms first. I'm not sure what this is, it looks somewhat like a dining room, combined with some others. :p

Thanks for suggestions sure will add more detail and i'll see if i can fix the chandelier.

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(This post was last modified: 11-10-2010, 01:57 AM by Gamemakingdude.)
11-10-2010, 01:01 AM
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Gamemakingdude Offline
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RE: Unnamed Story - [WIP]

Screenie 2 update
Added more eye candy
I hope its an improvement

[Image: 15x5s40.png]

Where is the dungeon related stuff and maybe dust piles or that stuff i see in amensia what's that enitity called?

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(This post was last modified: 11-10-2010, 07:43 AM by Gamemakingdude.)
11-10-2010, 07:40 AM
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