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		| Nye   Senior Member
 
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			| RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story  [Download][Video] 
 
				 (02-27-2011, 11:41 PM)Droopy Wrote:  You managed to build up tension in such a short period of time, something other custom stories I've played haven't mastered.The spook event's were cleverly put together, and you certainly know how to direct the player's fear.
 
 The only thing I would (constructively) criticize was how condensed the demo feels. My only concern would be that if the game is substantially longer, and it is still condensed, the player might feel a little worn out after 10-15 minutes.
 That said, it might just be my own personal experience. As on the other hand, the fact that it is so condensed makes it a very concentrated experience.
 
 I will be watching for the release, and look forward to playing/learning from your story.
 
Final release is over 30 minutes long    
You will see that I have tweaked everything you see in the demo and the player has plenty of puzzle-solving/tension building before the next encounter :p
			 
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		| sanderman789   Junior Member
 
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				waiting for the release looks awesome    |  |  
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		| thesnake   Junior Member
 
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			| RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video] 
 
				[*]29th Feb - The sense of accomplishment when you finally finish a map that has taken you over 20 hours to make...
 Do we have a confirmation here?
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		| Nye   Senior Member
 
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			| RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video] 
 
				 (03-03-2011, 02:33 AM)thesnake Wrote:  [*]29th Feb - The sense of accomplishment when you finally finish a map that has taken you over 20 hours to make...
 Do we have a confirmation here?
 
Only one of the maps    
I'm currently adding maps to the beginning of the story (pre-demo) and need to finish the ending. Not THAT much longer    
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		| Need4Power   Member
 
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			| RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video] 
 
				Any news about the custom story?,pictures or something?    |  |  
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		| Nye   Senior Member
 
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			| RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video] 
 
				 (03-08-2011, 03:54 PM)Need4Power Wrote:  Any news about the custom story?,pictures or something?  
Fiiiine! Check the main thread. by the time you read this, I have probably put preview pictures on    
EDIT: Added a couple of pics
			 
 
				
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		| Need4Power   Member
 
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			| RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video] 
 
				 (03-08-2011, 06:04 PM)Nye Wrote:   (03-08-2011, 03:54 PM)Need4Power Wrote:  Any news about the custom story?,pictures or something?  Fiiiine! Check the main thread. by the time you read this, I have probably put preview pictures on
  
 EDIT: Added a couple of pics
 
Wow,that look great   
there gonna be outdoor areas XD
 
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		| Nye   Senior Member
 
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			| RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video] 
 
				Added a new screenshot to the main thread. 
For those lazy ones, here it is: HERE
 
				
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		| Cryaotic   Senior Member
 
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				 (03-17-2011, 07:08 PM)Nye Wrote:  Added a new screenshot to the main thread.
 For those lazy ones, here it is: HERE
 
Is that a tower-like room that you have to do mild platforming to scale?
 
Awe. Some.
 
SO looking forward to seeing this in action, man.
			 
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		| Nye   Senior Member
 
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			| RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video] 
 
				 (03-17-2011, 07:30 PM)Cryaotic Wrote:   (03-17-2011, 07:08 PM)Nye Wrote:  Added a new screenshot to the main thread.
 For those lazy ones, here it is: HERE
 Is that a tower-like room that you have to do mild platforming to scale?
 
 Awe. Some.
 
 SO looking forward to seeing this in action, man.
 
It might be! And there is some crazy platforming at another bit,  except downwards and not upwards    
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