The great out doors [Custom story] FINISHED

[aidan499]

http://www.mediafire.com/?xwagggagw752ahi
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Please Reply To give me more ideas
and say how scarey it was!
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[Kyle]

I'm trying it right now...

[HumiliatioN]

I'm trying it right now...

Same here and there is not any script :/

Just 3 maps well lets try

[Kyle]

If I might ask, how old are you? If you don't want to answer, that is your choice.

Now about that custom story. It didn't seem scary, there were no scripts, like HumiliatioN said. The monster at the beginning was glitched, I believe you made all the grass collidable so you couldn't walk on it. No music. Overlapping walls. The second house was very awkward, there were overlapping walls and holes in the sides of the floor. And it took me around a minute to get the hatch door open. If this is your first custom story, you did a good job I guess because you tried.

[HumiliatioN]

Umm.. this map takes time to play few minutes... Too short.. and let me start your mistakes and negative sides on your first map.. Too many but it was ok for your first job.

First: The lighting was bad, first zombie outside was glitched and dummy spot to catch you.

Second: So many texture errors with walls and floors and that outside needs improvement, useless string and other items because you have lantern full of oil at begin.. then you have Oils, sanity potions its just not good for a scary and good custom story.

Third: There is no story at all no scripting whatsoever. Only description was nice at begin.

Okay dont be mad i just teach you to get some understand why this map is so bad But you are beginner like i am sort of..

Fix these on your full release or next upcoming project

Thanks anyway !

[aidan499]

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If I might ask, how old are you? If you don't want to answer, that is your choice.

Now about that custom story. It didn't seem scary, there were no scripts, like HumiliatioN said. The monster at the beginning was glitched, I believe you made all the grass collidable so you couldn't walk on it. No music. Overlapping walls. The second house was very awkward, there were overlapping walls and holes in the sides of the floor. And it took me around a minute to get the hatch door open. If this is your first custom story, you did a good job I guess because you tried.

I am now 23 year old nearly 24

[Kyle]

I am now 23 year old nearly 24

Sorry to say this, but I'm only 13 and I nearly mastered custom story making.

[MrBigzy]

Err, this isn't an e-peen competition now...don't be hatin on other people.

[Kyle]

Err, this isn't an e-peen competition now...don't be hatin on other people.

No hating on people that are of who are being hated on from the person hating on whoever.