Testers needed!

[HumiliatioN]

Yes, I need testers for my map its very short.

Only one 100% done map without "Notes" and need voice act somewhere.

Second map is hub and thats all so far. Every door is locked.

Give feedback and critic too! and Shall I continue this project or make new one and abandon this one.

Tell me if you have good improvements on this project and level design more and better and suggestions what I can made next

Download here: http://www.mediafire.com/?65dmw61agvro3a4

Thanks.

[devin413]

nice map wanna see more i dont see any bugs atmosphere is rly nice and dark "Scary" >.> nice work critic hmm there is no. ^^

[HumiliatioN]

nice map wanna see more i dont see any bugs atmosphere is rly nice and dark "Scary" >.> nice work critic hmm there is no. ^^

Okay. Thanks

[JoeBradleyUK]

nice map wanna see more i dont see any bugs atmosphere is rly nice and dark "Scary" >.> nice work critic hmm there is no. ^^

Okay. Thanks

I have never played custom stories made by another person before, how do I play yours after I've downloaded it? Is it just simply extracting the folder in the custom_stories folder?

[DRedshot]

I played it, and i liked it alot, gameplay is fun, rooms are really nice, especially the mansion! there were one or two little problems, but since it's a work in progress i wont go into too much detail:

Spoiler below!

1. in the room where you get the momento saying 'I need to find a way to break this work desk door" there was a cabinet with a hammer in it, I tried to break the door with the hammer a few times, and I was almost certain that it would work, but it didn't, It wasn't much of a problem because I found the solution soon enough, but it would have been nice to either:
(a): Make the hammer the solution as well as the crowbar
(b): re-word the momento so it doesn't suggest breaking it with the hammer (not sure how to do this) maybe try 'I need to find a way to get into this door'
( c): get rid of / move the hammer to a different place

Another minor issue was that you forgot to rotate the bonfire in one of the fireplaces, so light was shining out of the side, again it's a WIP so i'm not too bothered

positives:

1. Loved the atmosphere, especially in the mansion area, you added just enough lighting to allow you to see, but kept it very spooky!
2. I was constantly expecting a monster attack, very good, also because of the nice atmosphere.
3. The puzzles were great, they were not too difficult and were very fun!
4. you used the music events, which make scary points more scary in my opinion

all in all, it was great! keep working on it!

[Juby]

I have never played custom stories made by another person before, how do I play yours after I've downloaded it? Is it just simply extracting the folder in the custom_stories folder?

Yes it is.

I just played through it and found a few silly things.

Spoiler below!

Lantern Room:
1: There is a floating tri-candle stick.
2: if you take the boxes from under the bottles, the bottles float
3: There is a small spot where you can see outside the map (ceiling doesn't fully cover room)

I think that the story has potential!

[JetlinerX]

Bro! Thats THE BEST level design I have EVER SEEN! Seriously, the amount of love you put into this is un-surpassed great work! I will be eagerly awaiting the full version!!

[HumiliatioN]

Thanks guys, I love when people giving me critic and positive feedback

I'll try my best on the final version but this takes time I promise

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nice map wanna see more i dont see any bugs atmosphere is rly nice and dark "Scary" >.> nice work critic hmm there is no. ^^

Okay. Thanks

I have never played custom stories made by another person before, how do I play yours after I've downloaded it? Is it just simply extracting the folder in the custom_stories folder?

Yes.