[WIP] Custom story : The Weird Mess

[Conehead]

Hey guys, I have been busy creating this custom story "The Weird Mess", as I know there is still much work on, I'm in need of some testers to give me information of what I could improve in any of the levels. There is currently a little to no story in this custom story. So if anyone is in need to test/play a new custom story , check it out


NOTE: THIS STORY IS NOT FINISHED YET, NOR ARE THE LEVELS. ONLY PLAY IF YOU WANT TO TEST.


LINK
http://www.mediafire.com/?qso03dmiqdcra78

[skypeskype]

I'm interested....

[Conehead]

I'm interested....

Be sure to leave some feedback, I know there is alot to be done though

[skypeskype]

I'm interested....

Be sure to leave some feedback, I know there is alot to be done though

OK so I played it.

Spoiler below!

The first half was very good but too bright. The sound and level design are great. The outdoor areas need a skybox. You need to work a little bit with the monsters (Like making that grunt a poofer) and playing with pathnodes and disappear-time. Overall I liked it and that man you threw in my face scared the shit out of me by the way

[Conehead]

By "the first half" I assume you didn't found the key in "Mansion of Nightmares"?... There is supposed to be a key in that room with 3 doors, but somehow for me it appears invisible... I don't know maybe it has something to do with these chests being bugged or something.

there are like 9 levels to play

[skypeskype]

By "the first half" I assume you didn't found the key in "Mansion of Nightmares"?... There is supposed to be a key in that room with 3 doors, but somehow for me it appears invisible... I don't know maybe it has something to do with these chests being bugged or something.

there are like 9 levels to play

9 levels ? :O I thought the game ended when I picked up the laudunum and sanity potion from that chest up the stairs with the blue torches. I dunno where to go now . Also... there is an invisible wall in a room from that hallway before you enter the house of nightmares.

[Conehead]

Hehe yes 9, actually in the beginning you have a choise to go LEFT or RIGHT, when you go LEFT you'll find a locked door, the key for that door is in the "Mansion Of Nightmares", but somehow the key appears invisible (BUG, this is not scripted or anything) but you can take it up, if you take the right door, there are 3 other doors, if you take the right door from there, you'll hear a brute, the key is in THAT chest, but it's invisible, try picking it up if you can


Other doors are just some scary stuff :p

[Dark Knight]

yep, just EXCELLENT story!
very creepy atmosphere!!!!
great idea to use old good Painkiller music, so i found 3 mini-bugs:

Spoiler below!

- yes, there"are 2 invisible keys, but we can found 8in in right places
- in Storage in nightmares, if i die from hand of grunt, there"s no exit (i wake in hall with door leading to Black hall, but key from it - lies previously in rooms, when i died from grunt)
so i replays old save and if dont die, i can walk further
- too many lanterns , heh

just love level "Entrance to sacred house", and ending cutscene

[HumiliatioN]

Wow, this was very good custom story. Different places and that design was very decent. Scares was top notch I jizzed my pants many times you can't even imagine. Really scary and terrifying atmosphere. Very good!


Looking more your projects. Or is this Work in Progress?

Anyways good job!

[Tenno]

Great story, quite lengthy with a few well executed scares and nicely designed areas. It did feel like a weird mess but in a good way, so the title is accurate Considering its only a WIP I am very interested in seeing what happens with it next.

Great job so far