Work in progress The Fresh Start

**darkside** · 08-20-2011, 01:07 PM

Hello everyone!

This is my first (released) map ever. It's a work in progress, but I'm releasing a demo to know what you think about it.

The story(so far): You (no name yet) have been sentenced to death because you killed 8 people, but luckily, you manage to escape from the prison by digging. As you dig, you find an underground complex and explore it.

Download

The demo contains the first two maps: A castle-themed map and a small archives (will work on the names and the archives).

Please give constructive critism in what have I done wrong/good.

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Okay, I'm making some progress now. Also, I'm adding some things that will require you to decide. Your decision will choose between life and death, though.

Screenies

Spoiler below!

**zeravia** · 08-20-2011, 03:12 PM

(08-20-2011, 01:07 PM)darkside Wrote: Hello everyone!

This is my first (released) map ever. It's a work in progress, but I'm releasing a demo to know what you think about it.

The story(so far): You (no name yet) have been sentenced to death because you killed 8 people, but luckily, you manage to escape from the prison by digging. As you dig, you find an underground complex and explore it.

Download

The demo contains the first two maps: A castle-themed map and a small archives (will work on the names and the archives).

Please give constructive critism in what have I done wrong/good.

P.S.: how do you make a progress bar thingy?

Sounds good... I'll make an LP for you... ^__^ ive got three to do today... yours will be last today...

**HumiliatioN** · 08-20-2011, 03:13 PM

(08-20-2011, 01:07 PM)darkside Wrote: Hello everyone!

This is my first (released) map ever. It's a work in progress, but I'm releasing a demo to know what you think about it.

The story(so far): You (no name yet) have been sentenced to death because you killed 8 people, but luckily, you manage to escape from the prison by digging. As you dig, you find an underground complex and explore it.

Download

The demo contains the first two maps: A castle-themed map and a small archives (will work on the names and the archives).

Please give constructive critism in what have I done wrong/good.

P.S.: how do you make a progress bar thingy?

It was okay. Nothing special yet.. normal key finding and unlocking doors and couple monsters. Just add more in the drawers stuff like tinderboxes, oils and maybe decals is good always and paintings and more entertainment entities. Some rooms just like look like really dumb. But it was good no bugs or anything. Keep it up Smile

**darkside** · 08-20-2011, 03:59 PM

To zeravia: that would be good! Thank you Smile

To HumiliatioN: I will be constantly working on the layout, the rooms and everything. Thank you for the feedback Big Grin

**zeravia** · 08-20-2011, 04:38 PM

(08-20-2011, 03:59 PM)darkside Wrote: To zeravia: that would be good! Thank you

To HumiliatioN: I will be constantly working on the layout, the rooms and everything. Thank you for the feedback

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I can't wait to see it. I'll go ahead and post it with my LP's when it's up.

**Tenno** · 08-21-2011, 07:24 AM

I agree with HumiliatioN, keep working on the existing rooms and polishing them up. Some notes would be good, the absence of them really damages the experience.

Spoiler below!

Good luck with completing the rest Smile

**Dark Knight** · 08-21-2011, 08:54 AM

nice grunt in castle! lovin it.

seems thats the end?

Spoiler below!

**darkside** · 08-21-2011, 10:44 AM

(08-21-2011, 08:54 AM)Dark Knight Wrote: seems thats the end?

Yes, it is (for now).

Dark Knight and Tenno: Thank you for the feedback Rolleyes

**Khan** · 08-21-2011, 11:33 AM

That was pretty good, scared the piss outa me at 3:30AM, but yes, add more things to rooms, make them look good.