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[WIP] Horror Demo (First Map) - ThatCoolNinja - 11-20-2011 Hey guys, Im not to sure how to do this but I recently started making maps and this is a demo of my first map. http://www.mediafire.com/?85mw983yptpnysy v0.85 Hopefully you guys like it. I didnt know how to do credits so it ends when you go into the room with the big chair lol. Please leave some constructive criticism so I can get better at this. RE: [WIP] Horror Demo (First Map) - Arvuti - 11-20-2011 Going to play this, will be updating this post as I play. Spoiler below!
RE: [WIP] Horror Demo (First Map) - ThatCoolNinja - 11-20-2011 (11-20-2011, 08:28 PM)Arvuti Wrote: Going to play this, will be updating this post as I play. Spoiler below!
Update: Fixed ceiling in second map Removed alot of the blood RE: [WIP] Horror Demo (First Map) - Statyk - 11-21-2011 Geez Arvuti, don't get too mad >> He said he just started making maps, give him some time. We were all new at this stuff at some point. He even asks for "constructive criticism" which doesn't involve cursing or negative feedback. I can't play it now, since I'm on a friend's computer, but I'll give feedback when I get the chance (probably tomorrow, Sunday night, Walking Dead, and school tomorrow >> RE: [WIP] Horror Demo (First Map) - ThatCoolNinja - 11-21-2011 (11-21-2011, 12:54 AM)Statyk Wrote: Geez Arvuti, don't get too mad >> He said he just started making maps, give him some time. We were all new at this stuff at some point. Thanks I love walking dead btw. RE: [WIP] Horror Demo (First Map) - Khyrpa - 11-21-2011 "Please leave some constructive criticism so I can get better at this" I could see from the moment I entered this custom that this was someones first try. There was no real idea, but: "can you escape?". Just maps you built and scripted to test out. There is nothing bad about that though, hell even both my maps are made like that! "For the things we have to learn before we can do them, we learn by doing them." In other words, just do maps and have fun with it! Then some tips about the level editing of your maps. I think I have done one post about the things I think are important for a moody level. This post was directed at a starter, but you might find something useful in there too (your maps lacked in the lighting department). http://www.frictionalgames.com/forum/thread-11177-post-100633.html#pid100633 Quote:Geez Arvuti, don't get too mad >> He said he just started making maps, give him some time. We were all new at this stuff at some point.There is usually always something reasonable behind criticism, its only about the criticized if it becomes constructive or not. If one can not take criticism, why ask for it? RE: [WIP] Horror Demo (First Map) - ThatCoolNinja - 11-21-2011 (11-21-2011, 04:27 PM)Khyrpa Wrote: "Please leave some constructive criticism so I can get better at this" Thanks man, Ill take a look at the post as Im aspiring to get good at this. I can definitely take criticism ive been a youtuber for years now and getting criticism is practically second nature now. I appreciate all the comments so far so please keep them coming RE: [WIP] Horror Demo (First Map) - Statyk - 11-21-2011 Just played it, and here are my comments: Spoiler below!
I also noticed you probably intend on PewDiePie playing this. lol I saw your little hidden guy. I'd love to see PewDie's reaction to THAT betrayal. XD RE: [WIP] Horror Demo (First Map) - ThatCoolNinja - 11-21-2011 (11-21-2011, 09:41 PM)Statyk Wrote: Just played it, and here are my comments: Spoiler below!
Update! Fixed texture error pointed out by statyk. Added box lights. Rotated something that caused a scare to be "not so" scary. Made a key more visible. Fixed a scare from freaking out into a wall. RE: [WIP] Horror Demo (First Map) - ThatCoolNinja - 11-22-2011 Update! Read a tut on atmosphere and made it better I think. Fixed a glitch where the guy would get stuck at a part. Spent like 5 hours on adding stuff to the map that makes it look nicer. |