(05-18-2012, 04:47 PM)Bridge Wrote: Too much twang for my taste actually (except for the Narnia queen which was a bit smoother); I think your consonants need some real work, they are quite oppressive usually. I also don't think you quite have the foundation nailed for most of these voices. I recommend breathing with your diaphragm if you don't already and really put some power into it, usually the voices sound quite weak as if your voice is about to crack. Also I dunno how much prep time you had but sometimes it sounds like you are going in a different direction than intended and almost stumble; the accents and emphases are sometimes off. But overall not bad and you certainly can learn if you want to. Not to offend but I think you have a sexy voice though a bit abrasive at times (a better foundation will solve that I'd wager). Good luck!

(05-18-2012, 11:07 PM)Statyk Wrote: I like the variety. As well as seeing a new female voice actor on the forums =]

My only advice is to try to relax your voice, let it come out naturally. you seem to be reading or saying your lyrics word by word. Perhaps practice them over and over until you remember them in your head and they can flow out through your breath, not each word per breath, you know?

You're very clear, I would just like to see you smooth out your speech flow, much like the last link. (Not the TONE, again, the smoothness of your speech)

(05-19-2012, 12:27 AM)adriann Wrote: Thank you very much, Leeeyam, for the complement, and thank you, Miss
Rigi, for welcoming me! : D I've heard you before, Rigi, you're pretty
awesome!

It just occurred to me; if I can be linked to better practice monologues? I used these because I know the characters well, but if there are some that I can use for something like an assignment, perhaps, if it's not too much to ask for? In any case, the critiques were great and I'm ever grateful for them! Everything went way better than I expected, ahh. :>