Work in progress The Man Machine [CANCELLED]

**CorinthianMerchant** · 09-05-2012, 08:44 PM

I must write... I can't keep this inside me forever... I haven't told anyone about this, not even Elizabeth. I need to write about The Man Machine.

Welcome to The Man Machine! Yes, it's the full conversion I've worked on for over nine months and finally I've decided to make a WIP thread.

FEATURES:

Spoiler below!

SCREENSHOTS

Spoiler below!

Some of these screenshots are outdated, will upload newer when I get more time!

Feel free to leave feedback!

**failedALIAS** · 09-05-2012, 08:46 PM

Mother of flying fuck, this looks comparable to the campaign. . .
ALL MY FUCKING YES!!!

**Adny** · 09-05-2012, 08:48 PM

Y u no color fog ._.

Looks cool though.

**Kreekakon** · 09-05-2012, 08:50 PM

Oh gosh, detail, detail everywhere.

**CorinthianMerchant** · 09-05-2012, 08:50 PM

(09-05-2012, 08:48 PM)andyrockin123 Wrote: Y u no color fog ._.

Looks cool though.

I've actually done that, as I said, the screenshots are partially outdated.

Thank you all for the positive feedback!

**Bunnypoppop** · 09-05-2012, 10:13 PM

Looking shweeet.

Need a voice actor by any chance? Wink

**Statyk** · 09-05-2012, 10:47 PM

(09-05-2012, 08:50 PM)CorinthianMerchant Wrote: I've actually done that, as I said, the screenshots are partially outdated.

Thank you all for the positive feedback!

Could you update the screenshots please? I've been seeing the title in your signature for awhile now, waiting for when you'd post about it. The second screenshot looks awesome. But the first and third turn me off a bit =[

**Streetboat** · 09-05-2012, 11:47 PM

Looks good bru.

My favorite part; "features- atmosphere". Tongue

**Kman** · 09-05-2012, 11:52 PM

The second one looks nice, but to be honest the first and third are just kinda "meh". They're not necessarily bad, it's just they're nothing that's really too new or exciting. My main problem with it is the lighting, from what I can see you're relying on the light given off by the light entities to light your rooms alone (I'm just basing that off the screenshots you posted), which is a mistake I see a looooooot of mappers make. You should be using pointlights to fade in and fade out light and to highlight certain points in the map, I would go as far to say that you shouldn't be placing a light entity of any sort without having a pointlight or spotlight to accompanying it. If you need more help with that sort of stuff, I'd recommend just going into the maps from Amnesia and looking at how they used pointlights and spotlights.

**CorinthianMerchant** · 09-06-2012, 09:53 AM

I will listen to all the advice I receive, and I'll do my best to improve the quality of this mod

I don't have very much freetime now when school started, I have lots of homework, but I'll try to update the screenshots by friday. Hopefully next week.

@bunnypoppop I will see if I can find a role that fits your voice.