Nightmare While Awake Chapter 1 Demo

**HumiliatioN** · 09-30-2012, 04:10 PM

(09-30-2012, 03:26 PM)The chaser Wrote: This story doesn't have a decent ending. It just ends with a poofer and a wall? And, there are a lot of flickering textures. How much time have you spent in the level? For a single room I spent at last two hours. How much did you work it?

Also, this can't be even considered a demo. This is a not ended level. If you post a demo, at last post a decent finished level.

Sorry for this "bomb", but it's my way of thinking.

Spoiler below!

Actually, the walls in the corridor, why are so big? Put a lot of normal walls, it's what has to be done. The stair. There is a wall that can be seeked from the back, and I don't know if you noticed that the walls are invisible from the back. Also, if you look down, you can see the nothingness. Spend more time in level creation.

Yeah I played too, disappointing and horrible mapping.

**Statyk** · 09-30-2012, 05:07 PM

In short ironman0001. The forum in general usually does not want to see your FIRST level you have made. First stories are "suspicious" and have come out poorly 9/10 times. I suggest getting more practice and putting more love into what you create before you start posting them.

**ironman0001** · 09-30-2012, 10:39 PM

(09-30-2012, 03:26 PM)The chaser Wrote: This story doesn't have a decent ending. It just ends with a poofer and a wall? And, there are a lot of flickering textures. How much time have you spent in the level? For a single room I spent at last two hours. How much did you work it?

Also, this can't be even considered a demo. This is a not ended level. If you post a demo, at last post a decent finished level.

Sorry for this "bomb", but it's my way of thinking.

Spoiler below!

Actually, the walls in the corridor, why are so big? Put a lot of normal walls, it's what has to be done. The stair. There is a wall that can be seeked from the back, and I don't know if you noticed that the walls are invisible from the back. Also, if you look down, you can see the nothingness. Spend more time in level creation.

That's why it's called a demo... If alot of people like the demo, I'll make the cs longer and a better ending

(09-30-2012, 05:07 PM)Statyk Wrote: In short ironman0001. The forum in general usually does not want to see your FIRST level you have made. First stories are "suspicious" and have come out poorly 9/10 times. I suggest getting more practice and putting more love into what you create before you start posting them.

It may be my first one but i have done alot of research and alot of work on it! It took me like 3 weeks just to make this demo! i added jumpscares and even custom scary music!

**Statyk** · 09-30-2012, 10:43 PM

3 weeks is most definitely NOT enough time. Even for a demo.

**ironman0001** · 09-30-2012, 10:47 PM

(09-30-2012, 10:43 PM)Statyk Wrote: 3 weeks is most definitely NOT enough time. Even for a demo.

What about 3 weeks everyday for about 8 hours straight?

(09-30-2012, 12:14 AM)ironman0001 Wrote: You are in a house that is being controlled by an uknown person! You are locked inside until you find out who! I added alot of scares and tension and scary music! Let me know how you guys like it! This is a demo but it's still really scary! xD And if you like it then i will make the full one as soon as possible! Here is the link

http://www.mediafire.com/?g0y002r8ljy42xl

#mce_temp_url#

Everybody just give it a chance! Don't judge a book by it's cover... And... get an extra set of diapers when you play it xD

**Kman** · 09-30-2012, 11:13 PM

Yeah 3 weeks going 8 hours straight still isn't enough time to make a proper demo. It took me a good 6-7 months of experience with the level editor before I made anything that I thought was high enough quality that I would feel good about releasing it.

**Statyk** · 09-30-2012, 11:21 PM

Is this the custom story you've been trying to make flying jesus's in and other script that were posted in the support section? If you ask me, that's not scary. Any custom story like that, I'd leave and flip a table in frustration as soon as I saw one of those typical, overused jumpscares. I've done it before, and it's ruined a lot of custom stories for me. I haven't played a custom story in months.

~~DnALANGE~~ · 09-30-2012, 11:24 PM

3 weeks and 8 hours a day?
Comon.. you've go0t to be kidding us!!
Well.. its 1 room and 1 long { stretched } hallway....
Like 8 walls are glitches\doubled...
and...
the scares.. cheap..
I believe you want to build sometime nice..
But be hounest with us.. this was really extremely bad!
These things belong on your own pc for testing and trying stuff out..
Next time try to build something longer\less glitchy\ and try to work with some other scares\scriptings..
I'm sorry to be so rude,, but i think it is not good!
Lange

**ironman0001** · 09-30-2012, 11:52 PM

(09-30-2012, 11:21 PM)Statyk Wrote: Is this the custom story you've been trying to make flying jesus's in and other script that were posted in the support section? If you ask me, that's not scary. Any custom story like that, I'd leave and flip a table in frustration as soon as I saw one of those typical, overused jumpscares. I've done it before, and it's ruined a lot of custom stories for me. I haven't played a custom story in months.

PFFT! Flying jesus (aka: Teleporting Naked Guys) Are the most popular jumpscares!

If you were locked in a closet for 3 weeks, That wouldn't be long?

**Kman** · 10-01-2012, 12:08 AM

(09-30-2012, 11:52 PM)ironman0001 Wrote: PFFT! Flying jesus (aka: Teleporting Naked Guys) Are the most popular jumpscares!

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