[WIP] The Dreamstride [Released]

[i3670]

In what way do you think they could use some touch ups?

[Rapture]

Some spotlights (with shadows) for the left windows. And put some light black fog boxes for the right windows and remove the pointlights illuminating them.

[i3670]

I assume you're talking about the first picture.

As you can see the windows closest to the camera are boarded up, and only the window at the far end is clear, and that window has got a spotlight. You just can't see it in that pic.

As for the fog box. I don't think so, just because I don't think it looks good.

[Altureus]

Hey man... I noticed you were doing a narration. If you'd like I would be willing to help out with that. Send me some lines that you want done. Looks promising by the way. I'm excited to see the finished product.

http://soundcloud.com/austinmccomb

[i3670]

Hey man... I noticed you were doing a narration. If you'd like I would be willing to help out with that. Send me some lines that you want done. Looks promising by the way. I'm excited to see the finished product.

http://soundcloud.com/austinmccomb

You sir, have a brilliant dark voice. You sound a bit like Brad Pitt in Benjamin Button, with the broad american accent. It just so happens that I actually need a dark voice for the voice of doctor and if you can alter your voice a bit even a role as a servant.

[i3670]

Update: decided to cut the final map and replace with a more puzzley one have also begun scripting the puzzles.

[CorinthianMerchant]

First picture is amazing...

[i3670]

First picture is amazing...

Why thank you hope you think the entire CS is as amazing

[i3670]

Updated with some new screenshots, and a note.

[HumiliatioN]

Oh, I beta tested this, this was freaking good!