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				Yummy... I like it. I love it!   
			 
			
			
 
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	| 02-10-2013, 08:20 PM  | 
	
		
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				 (02-10-2013, 07:42 PM)Robosprog Wrote:     
 
Mainly so this thread doesn't die, but yeah, criticize away. 
Better than any exterior map I could make :o 
It's a little dark (it's night-time, so I can't complain too much) but I love the effect of the fog around the moon!
			  
			
			
 
			
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				 (02-10-2013, 07:42 PM)Robosprog Wrote:     
 
Mainly so this thread doesn't die, but yeah, criticize away. 
Since the moon is so bright as it is in this picture, the surroundings should be lighter.
 
I really like it! Is it a skybox?
 
I really want to see how that lake looks (If it's a lake) 
The reflection of the moon is very nice.
			  
			
			
 
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				 (02-10-2013, 11:12 PM)Robosprog Wrote:  ![[Image: C0279990B6B908F8DAA0A53E4FB7B0DB1B71BF5C]](http://cloud-2.steampowered.com/ugc/866080546818901954/C0279990B6B908F8DAA0A53E4FB7B0DB1B71BF5C/)  
AWMG its beautiful!
			  
			
			
 
			
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread 
			 
			
				Try adding your skybox as a cubemap to the lake and see what happens :] 
Edit: Or you've possibly already done that...
			 
			
			
 
 ![[Image: mZiYnxe.png]](http://i.imgur.com/mZiYnxe.png)  ジ
  
			
				
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				 (02-11-2013, 03:08 PM)Robosprog Wrote:  (Image) 
This is more.. dark, I think, as well as further inland. 
I.. I can't see a thing in the picture. All I can see is the torch and stars.
			  
			
			
 
			
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				 (02-11-2013, 03:08 PM)Robosprog Wrote:     
This is more.. dark, I think, as well as further inland. 
Since it's THAT dark the torch would probably have influence on the surroundings by giving them a dark red-orange color
			  
			
			
 
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				Looks fine on my monitor.
			 
			
			
 
			
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				 (02-12-2013, 01:05 PM)Robosprog Wrote:  Thanks for the lighting bit - it looks better now, alternatively, because fuck it, lake in the daytime. 
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Nicely done, Robosprog ! 
It looks pretty awesome to me.
			  
			
			
 
			
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread 
			 
			
				Here. New Screenshots from my Custom Story. 
Front Hall.
 
Mess Hall.
 
The Bedroom.
 
Archives. 
Please tell me what i did wrong, so i can fix it.
			  
			
			
 
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