Adrianis
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
Think you could do with a bit more red in the red one Hardarm, the blue one feels blue but the red doesn't feel red enough. Currently, I'd probably say the blue looks better but seeing the previous screens, the red colour really suits the assets.
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PutraenusAlivius
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
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I have a question. The person who owns a mansion have this quarter; where he would work and sleep there. What is the name for it?
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03-12-2013, 10:52 AM |
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FlawlessHappiness
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
(03-12-2013, 10:52 AM)JustAnotherPlayer Wrote: OFF-TOPIC:
I have a question. The person who owns a mansion have this quarter; where he would work and sleep there. What is the name for it?
So he's practically living there?
... How about... Living room
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03-12-2013, 11:35 AM |
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
(03-12-2013, 10:48 AM)Adrianis Wrote: Think you could do with a bit more red in the red one Hardarm, the blue one feels blue but the red doesn't feel red enough. Currently, I'd probably say the blue looks better but seeing the previous screens, the red colour really suits the assets.
Is it ok like this? (i've added more few stuff too)
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03-12-2013, 01:23 PM |
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FlawlessHappiness
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
(03-12-2013, 01:23 PM)Hardarm Wrote: (03-12-2013, 10:48 AM)Adrianis Wrote: Think you could do with a bit more red in the red one Hardarm, the blue one feels blue but the red doesn't feel red enough. Currently, I'd probably say the blue looks better but seeing the previous screens, the red colour really suits the assets.
Is it ok like this? (i've added more few stuff too)
Looks great!
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03-12-2013, 01:28 PM |
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Adrianis
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Yeh looks great Hardarm. I could be wrong, but it looks like the Bilbo's on the lights at the top & right are the wrong colour (kinda orange coloured), but forgive me if they are actually corresponding to the lights in the room, it might just be the way the colours mix in the middle
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03-12-2013, 01:44 PM |
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Wow! That new version looks quite fantastic Hardarm! And I think it also has much more scary potential now.
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03-12-2013, 02:03 PM |
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Hardarm
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Thank you all!!
@Adrianis yeah, I tried to make them match the room; I tried the fully red ones but I thought they looked weird. :/
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03-12-2013, 02:17 PM |
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Yeah, i know. The fog is too bright. I just can't find the right colour. Anyway, give me your constructive feedback. This screenshot sucks, huh?
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03-14-2013, 08:41 AM |
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Adrianis
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
(03-14-2013, 08:41 AM)JustAnotherPlayer Wrote:
Yeah, i know. The fog is too bright. I just can't find the right colour. Anyway, give me your constructive feedback. This screenshot sucks, huh?
Dude, you don't need to make excuses for your work. If you think it's not good enough and can say why, then you don't need other people to tell you what it needs to make it better.
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03-14-2013, 10:26 AM |
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