[RELEASED] Collapsing Cosmos : The Silver Key

**daortir** · 02-26-2014, 01:47 AM

Hey : D !
Glad you loved it sir ! This is the first mod of the series as I said, for now I don't have any time to work on a CS but I will resume development right at the end of april ! At this point I'll think about any help I might need :3.

**Deadon** · 02-26-2014, 01:55 AM

Hey! that's my birth month! It seems everyone starts working then

**daortir** · 02-26-2014, 02:17 AM

lal, dat signature ! Nothig sure man don't get excited yet xD !

**Deadon** · 02-26-2014, 02:30 AM

I know, It's something my buddy once told me so I just thought of it.
O_O Perhaps I should give him credit...

But of course, at the end, turned out he had too much to do...

And he stunk

**Red** · 02-28-2014, 12:27 PM

Gonna try, it's been a long time since i have taken a look at a custom story.
Prepare for deep critism, i've always been squeamish when it comes to these kind of subjects. In my opinion: There's no perfect cutom story, but the best ones are close to it. Let's see how does this manage if i would but this between 1 and 10, I'll be back.

**daortir** · 02-28-2014, 01:42 PM

Sweet !
Looking forward to your criticism, I hope you'll enjoy the mod ^^ and I really want to know your opinion about it :3.

**Red** · 02-28-2014, 02:24 PM

Okay, now it's done, i finished it.

To say frankly: Good and Unique story, but it wasn't flawless.

First pros.

- Unique mapping.

- Good lighting in some areas.

- Good atmosphere and sounds.

- Custom content.

- Modified enemies.

- excellent music.

- Interesting story.

- Some good puzzles.

CONS. ( I meant) You didn't see anything

- Lighting was lacking at some points

- I fell truoght floor 4 times! That's pretty fatal flaw. (Fell throught lava,
and the part where water appeared at the library.)

- More checkpoints.

- Loading the game at the rleyh annex, was broken, the level was messed up.

- And maybe the worst part, PLATFORMING! I hate games which have it in first person view. (My opinion, just accept it)

I calculated for this story based on the flaws and opinions a pretty good score of 7.5/10, better than average.(in 1 -10 scale)

Very good work for the first story, i was suprised!

**daortir** · 02-28-2014, 02:50 PM

Glad you liked it overall ! I think many people -including me now that i think about it- thought that there was too much platforming, I will most likely change that in future mods ^^.
The Autosaves were kind of terrible as well, I will absolutely work to improve this in the future :v.

Thanks a lot for the feedback and the bug reports : ) !

**Red** · 02-28-2014, 02:57 PM

(02-28-2014, 02:50 PM)daortir Wrote: Glad you liked it overall ! I think many people -including me now that i think about it- thought that there was too much platforming, I will most likely change that in future mods ^^.
The Autosaves were kind of terrible as well, I will absolutely work to improve this in the future :v.

Thanks a lot for the feedback and the bug reports : ) !

You're welcome! And btw, those are some flaws, someone like me also do.
Checkpoints, autosaves, they are impotant, but troublesome and i am too lazy to constantly put them everywhere.

Looking forward for your future mods! You might have the potential to make that masterpiece i am eagerly searching for!

EDIT: Thanks for the rep! Second suprise of the day.

**Deadon** · 03-01-2014, 02:23 AM

Yeah, Autosaves Are a pain in the ass. I wish Frictional Games Made it easier, like an area or something.