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				![[Image: RXepyND.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/RXepyND.jpg) 
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				 (08-08-2014, 03:32 PM)endosine Wrote:  ![[Image: RXepyND.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/RXepyND.jpg)  
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				turn up the brightness on your screen then because I can see it clearly...
			 
			
			
 
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				 (08-08-2014, 03:35 PM)Badcat5550 Wrote:   (08-08-2014, 03:32 PM)endosine Wrote:  ![[Image: RXepyND.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/RXepyND.jpg)  
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I can't see a thing lol 
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				Well, these are something we've considered done for a while now, but I'd like to hear some feedback for potential tweaking. What do you think? 
			 
			
			
 
			
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				@Wapez... 
I'm pretty that's the study from the original game... it looks like it's been slightly edited... uhm... yeah.
 
Tweaked the map from my earlier post...
  
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				 (08-08-2014, 06:24 PM)Wapez Wrote:  Well, these are something we've considered done for a while now, but I'd like to hear some feedback for potential tweaking. What do you think? 
 
 
 
Second one looks extaclly like one of the rooms from Amnesia study.  
Lighting needs to be improved a lot, the spotlight at the window with curtain is waaay too bright and unrealistic.  
Second, the room lacks in details and stuff, you need to fill it up with more random, typical study stuff - paper piles, books, etc.
			  
			
			
			
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				 (08-08-2014, 06:53 PM)Robosprog Wrote:  (awesome critism) 
Thanks Robo, just what I needed. I'll try all of what you explained! Also, about the strut, it's architecture is far more complicated than it looks - I wouldn't worry too much about that, but I might post a screeny showing the entire way down.
  (08-08-2014, 07:36 PM)Lazzer. Wrote:  ...the room lacks in details and stuff, you need to fill it up with more random, typical study stuff - paper piles, books, etc. 
I really don't see why I need to do this. Filling a room up with that kind of stuff shouldn't be done if there's no reason for it to be that messy. I don't need critique about our design decisions, but rather about our way of approaching them.
 everyone Wrote:It looks like FG's study and might be ripped. 
No. There is two windows and some bookshelves are the same model. Apart from this and the chairs by the window there's really no more similarity to the maps. Lighting is different, roof and floor and carpets is different, detail is different. The room isn't even the same size, in fact far from the same scale. I see your point of view but really, go into the FG map. It's really not that similar.
 
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Just don't get all cocky and stuff when you really don't know what's up. Thanks.
			  
			
			
 
			
				
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				 (08-08-2014, 08:03 PM)Wapez Wrote:   (08-08-2014, 06:53 PM)Robosprog Wrote:  (awesome critism)  
Thanks Robo, just what I needed. I'll try all of what you explained! Also, about the strut, it's architecture is far more complicated than it looks - I wouldn't worry too much about that, but I might post a screeny showing the entire way down. 
 
 (08-08-2014, 07:36 PM)Lazzer. Wrote:  ...the room lacks in details and stuff, you need to fill it up with more random, typical study stuff - paper piles, books, etc.  
I really don't see why I need to do this. Filling a room up with that kind of stuff shouldn't be done if there's no reason for it to be that messy. I don't need critique about our design decisions, but rather about our way of approaching them. 
 
everyone Wrote:It looks like FG's study and might be ripped.  
No. There is two windows and some bookshelves are the same model. Apart from this and the chairs by the window there's really no more similarity to the maps. Lighting is different, roof and floor and carpets is different, detail is different. The room isn't even the same size, in fact far from the same scale. I see your point of view but really, go into the FG map. It's really not that similar. 
 
@endosine 
Just don't get all cocky and stuff when you really don't know what's up. Thanks. 
 I don't need critique about our design decisions, but rather about our way of approaching them
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				@Wapez 
Oh fuck off, i'm cocky one? says the most pretentious asshole i've had the misfortune to meet, seriously not a good idea to get on my bad side mate because you're narrowly crossing a line. 
 
I'm not cocky at all, kiddo. Hell I hate half of my fucking work and I've already lost half of my motivation after losing my project which I spent years on and I couldn't give a fuck less. 
 
How about you actually listen for once and stop acting like a child.  
 
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