[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread

[Gilligan's Hell]

So... here's the menu for my new start.

[CarnivorousJelly]

Looking good, sir!

May I suggest having that blood stain on the left side continue up on to the side of the table/bench/thing?

[Daktoa]

Spoiler below!

Fuck, sorry about that, I'll post a brighter one shortly.
EDIT:Better?

Just an opinion, but I feel like it'd be really cool if the camera traveled forward through the tunnels and stuff, then you could loop it by having it go into total darkness, then start back at the beginning. Just an opinion, I don't know what's through there so idk if it's even possible.

[MyRedNeptune]

Somethin I made for my new project.

Looks great, but I have trouble believing the room is not lit by the splendid day outside. My room is brighter when there's a friggin storm.

[Newsman Waterpaper]

Spoiler below!

Fuck, sorry about that, I'll post a brighter one shortly.
EDIT:Better?

Just an opinion, but I feel like it'd be really cool if the camera traveled forward through the tunnels and stuff, then you could loop it by having it go into total darkness, then start back at the beginning. Just an opinion, I don't know what's through there so idk if it's even possible.

Mean you like this?: http://www.frictionalgames.com/forum/thread-19781.html
It would cool but you make the whole map has to turned into a entity and needs specific bones in them etc.

[Hardarm]

More edits to an earlier map...

endo that is something awesome, you should make the lighter parts more bright though, so there is more contrast

[The chaser]

http://i.imgur.com/nkFwgEo.png

It's being done in blender but will touch the level editor soon. Yeah, it's all ice, it's been retextured. The point light is just so something is seen.

Spoiler below!

It's an ice church, it will appear in the 2nd part of "The Otherworld"

[victorkim890(KimmyChimmy)]

can the ice be seethrough like the seethrough window in amnesia

[Slanderous]

can the ice be seethrough like the seethrough window in amnesia

Fellin' okay sir?

[victorkim890(KimmyChimmy)]

whops i was replying about the ice church from the picture the ice is not seethrough